Is your script's opening strong enough to grab readers, agents, or producers? I provide sharp, constructive professional feedback that goes beyond surface-level notes. I will review your first 5 screenplay pages, and provide structured narrative feedback (2 pages), covering:
• Hook and pacing
• Dialogue flow and character voice
• Scene clarity and emotional tone
Delivered as a written PDF summary.
This offer is ideal if you're preparing for:
• Script competitions
• Production submissions
• Studio reviews or funding applications
With the add on, and using script software, you can add me as a temporary collaborator on WriterDuet, Final Draft, or Celtx.
No software? I’ll upload your script to WriterDuet, add in-line comments, and return a commented PDF or FDX file (available only with the add-on). Allow 8-10 working days for delivery. Only two offers each month due to ongoing workload.
Credentials:
Best Drama Screenplay Winner: Duality: 8 & Halfilm Festival, Rome
Best Film Award Short: The Night of Halloween
Selected Short: Separation
Film Reviewer – NY & NoHo Cinefest, Urbanite Film Festival