Consultancy - CJ Content Creation

Film/Pilot Screenplay Feedback - 5 Pages

Is your script&#39;s opening strong enough to grab readers, agents, or producers? I provide sharp, constructive professional feedback that goes beyond surface-level notes. I will review your first 5 screenplay pages, and provide structured narrative feedback (2 pages), covering:<br>• Hook and pacing<br>• Dialogue flow and character voice<br>• Scene clarity and emotional tone<br>Delivered as a written PDF summary.<br>This offer is ideal if you&#39;re preparing for:<br>• Script competitions<br>• Production submissions<br>• Studio reviews or funding applications<br>With the add on, and using script software, you can add me as a temporary collaborator on WriterDuet, Final Draft, or Celtx.<br>No software? I’ll upload your script to WriterDuet, add in-line comments, and return a commented PDF or FDX file (available only with the add-on). Allow 8-10 working days for delivery. Only two offers each month due to ongoing workload.<br>Credentials:<br>Best Drama Screenplay Winner: Duality: 8 &amp; Halfilm Festival, Rome<br>Best Film Award Short: The Night of Halloween<br>Selected Short: Separation<br>Film Reviewer – NY &amp; NoHo Cinefest, Urbanite Film Festival