Consultancy - CJ Content Creation
5 Page Film/Pilot Screenplay Feedback
Is your script's opening strong enough to grab readers, agents, or producers in the first 5 pages? As a freelance screenwriter, I provide sharp, constructive professional feedback that goes beyond surface-level notes. I will review your first 5 screenplay pages, and provide three structured paragraphs of narrative feedback (1 page), covering:<br>• Hook and pacing<br>• Dialogue flow and character voice<br>• Scene clarity and emotional tone<br>Delivered as a written PDF summary.<br>This offer is ideal if you're preparing for:<br>• Script competitions<br>• Production submissions<br>• Studio reviews or funding applications<br>With the add on, and using script software, you can add me as a temporary collaborator on WriterDuet, Final Draft, or Celtx.<br>No software? I’ll upload your script to WriterDuet, add in-line comments, and return a commented PDF or FDX file (available only with the add-on). Allow 5 working days for delivery.<br>Credentials:<br>Best Drama Screenplay Winner: Duality: 8 & Halfilm Festival, Rome<br>Best Film Award Short: The Night of Halloween<br>Selected Short: Separation<br>Film Reviewer – NY & NoHo Cinefest, Urbanite Film Festival
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